minichou's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love at first bite]

This is a cute short game, though I wish there was more character development so the player can feel closer to the characters. I think there's too many ellipses boxes than actual dialog, I understand the character is moving to a different place, but is the ellipses box really needed? You could just state that he's going to point A to point B. Also, I wish you did character sprites for the minor characters (Hanako's aunt, Ryota's friends) because it feels pretty empty that Hanako is the only active sprite that we see. Overall, this game was a cute game; cliche but cute, It certaintly had a bit more depth than your Ikimono High game.

[The Pizza Man]

This is a cute game, I like that they rhyme, and their rhyming style is that of the old days. Like other reviews, the voice acting could be louder. I think the art style should be improved a bit, especially for the lady since most of the time she's giving her dead stare with those big green eyes. Though I would like more choices/things to do, because it does get a little boring hearing them talk. I like how this game can turn into anything,not just the cliche porn route, thats really different. Good game 4/5

[Ikimono High: Monster girls dating sim]

Adorable game! I love the cute art and the dialogue. I dated Nomi-chan first ( she's the one I had my eye on haha), I then got the Hidzume ending and then all the other endings. The art is cute, the story was decent, and the characters were ok. I felt that all the girls instantly were in love with Kei so It was easy to win their hearts,
Some bad points to this game is the system used here-You have to buy gifts to progress the game or else you'll be stuck having the same responses with them every day. I don't really like that because once you run out of money, you just sleep and poof more money (kinda fantasy like with the money popping out of nowhere. Maybe include a job system?). Also I wish there were more stuff like picture scenes (ex: Whenever Kei kisses a girl, The group hug part, etc.) and I wish that Kei could explore more out of the school, we only get to see the classroom and the roof and that's it. It's kinda boring with just two backgrounds and we can never see when Kei and another character hang out/date. Another bad point about this game that I noticed was Kei's reactions. I saw that Kei looked unsure at times if he liked the girl or not, with the group of ellipsis and a shy face looking off. I understand if he was shy but It seemed that he was forcing himself to like the girl so the girl chosen wouldn't get her heart broken. A good example of this (spoiler alert) is when Hidzume kisses him, and the next time they talk, she asks if he liked the kiss, He looks off and looks like he wants to say no or something. I don't know if what I'm guessing is canon or not, but It's just something I noticed.

Overall, this was a pretty cute game, but I wish there were more choices, consequences (like if you cheat on your girlfriend ), and more scenes/places to go to. Maybe if there were more things included, the game wouldn't be so repetitive at times and boring, because I had to go through a system like this: Talk to girl-study-study-eat-sleep or talk-study-sleep and that gets boring very quickly.

-Question- What program did you use to make this?

KoltonKennedy responds:

Thank you for the review! I couldn't add more features to this game because there was a problem I'm having trouble with. Anyway, I'll add some of the suggestions you said in the sequel.

Hey, that's life you know? Repetitive. Eat, sleep, repeat. Aww...who am I kidding?

I made this game in Adobe flash cs5. All of my games are made with that program.

[Return to Riddle School]

Great remake! I always loved the riddle series and would play it alot when I was younger. Good job!

[The Bar - Chapter 1]

Nice, but You should've added more to it. It's too bleak, I hope chapter 2 has alot more in it. this is ok, I guess. You could've added more, but I like the music ^o^

[The Splitting: Chapter 1]

What a great game! Took me a while though, and I had to go google a walkthrough for the Jumbo sock part though. The puzzles made me think. Can't wait for chapter two!

[NG's 20th Anniversary Collab]

I really loved this! And happy Anniversary NG! Even though I didn't join this site like everyone else did when it first came out in the 90s, I still (kinda) grew up with NG. I first went on this site back in 2011 and I finally made a account in March of this year. This collab is so cool but I wish it stuck to the original voices because I think this would've done nicer. I love this collab and I love NG. Keep it up guys! I hope that i, too, become one of NG's greats :D

[Joeyquest]

This game is great and looks beautiful but i wish there was some music, i am 5 minutes in and starting to get bored. You should add some sound effects and catchy music to keep the interest of the person playing it. Also, i can see that this game is inspired by Steven universe, which is great and all but you should put some more originality in it because I've seen alot of material back in my earlier days of tumblr that loom very similar to this.

[Naked Man]

I like this game, i was actually kinda good at this newgrounds game for once! Though i had to frequently remember that Z is for jump and X is for shooting. I am not very used to that format and prefer space as jump and maybe s to shoot? I am not sure. This game is nice but not very original. The background, the whole forrest look is copied in many other games, and the character reminds me of snake from metal gear solid(kinda). I love how you did the trees and water though, good job

[Donald Trump Pinball]

This game is too much fun, I GOT 6TH PLACE BOO YA