minichou's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[KAFEEN]

This is great but, the animation is too shaky, and the head and body scale. Some of the proportions look a bit abnormal when zoomed out, in the first scene, where the young girl walks to her mother, her head is too big. You might need to work on your proportion sizes.

TaraGraphika responds:

Not gonna lie, I'm bad at proportions. And yes, majority of the animation is a bit too shaky, and missing a lot of inbetweens. I'm planning to make things smoother for my next work. Thank you:D

[white noise machine]

This is amazing but the only thing i didn't like about this was the art. I've seen the art done many times and even though this is a beautiful movie, the originality in this is somewhat strong. You might need to find a art style that represents YOU and your ART.

dylan responds:

"i'm dancing on my own
i make the moves up as i go"

- beyoncé, 2014

[TEH CRISTAL JEMZ]

PURL

Chauder responds:

EAND PURL

[Grocery Guy Episode 1]

This is kinda bad but I see some potential in this. The animation looks like something out of a goanimate video and is very bland and blocky. All the characters in this movie move roboticily and slow. The voice acting is kinda good but needs more people because I think the same guy is doing all the voices. Other than that, if you could animate this a little better or use a different program, get more voice actors, good sound effects and non-bland tune this could be a favorite of many.

Taliwacky responds:

Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback. You have given me some great tips that i plan on using for episode 2. I also recognized the slow blocky animation and have been tinkering with the characters.

[The Real World]

This was okay, but I felt that the pacing was a bit fast in some parts and that the dialogue wasn't very unique. Also, the tone of when the girl was speaking sounded bland and monotone in some parts of the movie. This movie reminds me of a scene in a 90s movie about growing up and I like that.

Sanbles responds:

Hah, somebody else said a similar thing. I can definitely see what you mean though. I don't know if the movie "feeling like something from the 90s" is a good thing or a bad thing, but I'll take is a bad thing since I want to make MODERN STUFF :D. I'll try to get better with my dialogue :)

[On 32]

i dont get this and it's kinda slow paced and not funny....

jlorp responds:

I've been told "Slow paced and not funny" is sort of my thing.

[Wild Fur]

i love it! i love the designs for the tiger and owl!!! so cute! the one thing i didnt like was that the music started late in the beginning. It's a bit too sketchy on some the people but other than that, it was cute!!! yay!!

HowardWimshurst responds:

Hahaha thank you very much for the review. I'm very happy that you like it

[loves me, loves me not]

emotional also im beyonce?!

dylan responds:

"i need no permission, did i mention"

- beyoncé, 2008

[My 10 Amazing Facts]

its ok, but it's OK. i mean, theres nothing special about it, it's kinda funny. i like it.

scottwjsm responds:

I know what you mean, thanks for the review!